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• Napisz, od jak dawna i dlaczego robisz zakupy w sklepach internetowych.
• Opisz urządzenie, które kupiłeś(-aś).
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• Poinformuj, w jaki sposób sklep zareagował na Twoją reklamację.

Do you often shop online? Here’s what happened to me recently. Personally, I love doing online shopping. That way of buying things is so much easier than going to the shop. I don’t have to waste time and money because buying train ticket is unnecessary. I am buying online since my brother teach my how to do it.
Last Monday I bought a new, silver laptop. It looked very fancy and professional. I was very happy until I turn it on. Then it turned out that my laptop has a broken screen… I couldn’t see anything on it! Whole screen was black with white dots. I was so upset.
Of course I decided to return this device to the shop. I fulfilled the form, packed the laptop and went to the post office to send it. They accepted my complaint but also were shocked that theirs laptop was broken.

Do you often shop online? Here’s what has happened to me recently. Personally, I love doing online shopping. This way of buying things is much easier than going to the shop. I don’t have to waste time and money on public transport to get to the shop. I've been buying online since my brother taught my how to do it.

Last Monday I bought a new, silver laptop. It looked very fancy and professional. I had been very happy until I switched it on. Then it turned out that my laptop had a broken screen… I couldn’t see anything on it! The whole screen was black with white dots. I was so upset.

Of course, I decided to return this device to the shop. I filled up the form, packed the laptop and went to the post office to send it. They accepted my complaint but were also shocked that their laptop got broken.

Wyjaśnienie:

nie sprawdzałem pod kątem zgodność z poleceniem, tylko samą treść