Czy ktoś potrafiłby powiedzieć ile punktów (mniej więcej) dostałabym za to na egzaminie?
Zamieszczam kryteria oceniania:
treść - max 4 punkty
spójność i logika wypowiedzi - max 2
zakres środków językowych - max 2
poprawność środków językowych - max 2
A tu praca:
Hi Betty,
I’ve just won a poster competition called “Our Natural World”.
I decided to take part in this competition in order to show my interest in our Earth. Moreover, I like doing art, so it was a pleasure. I made my poster with oil paint. There’s our planet on it. Around it I drew people holding hands and added some more details. There’s a text running at the top of the poster. It says ,,Our Natural World”, which is the title of the competition as you probably noticed. I knew it was a great poster but I was really surprised when I won. It also made me so happy!
I hope to hear from you soon.
XYZ

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