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Czy ktoś poprawi żeby było past simple i past continous albo dobrze napisałem. Proszę bo nie mam dużo czasu bo jeszcze na gegrę muszę się uczyć


It was a beautiful day when my family took the train together to Władywłasowo. But now it's 06:45 and out of the house to the train station. At 7 am we arrived in front of the station but what we saw we were shocked. The railway station was undergoing renovation and to get to the platform we had to walk a longer way which the gentleman pointed out. It's 7:13 and the train leaves in 2 minutes and we just reached the train station and I thought it had left. But it turned out that the train was 10 minutes late. After 10 minutes the train arrived and we put our heavy suitcases on the shelf and took our seats. Then the train left the station and we drove for 5 hours and arrived in Władywłasowo. After a few hours of walking around the town we entered the hotel and rested for the next 7 days.


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It was a beautiful day when my family took the train together to Władywłasowo.

We left house at 6:45. At 7 am we got to the station and what we saw surprised us! The railway station was undergoing renovation and to get to the platform we had to walk a longer way. It's 7:13, the train leaves in 2 minutes and we just reached the train station. I thought it had left but it turned out that the train was 10 minutes late. Finally the train arrived and we put our heavy suitcases on the shelf and took our seats. Then the train left the station and we drove for 5 hours. When we got to the Władysławowo we went for a walk. After a few hours of walking around the town we entered the hotel and spent next 7 days there. I really enjoyed time spent in Władysławowo and rested well.